I'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
Your Water project slide show is really impactful. I like how you’ve opened with “Water!” which straight-away lets a reader know it’s important with a little bit of a panic because it is a little scary to think how clean water is so scarce for lots of people.
The images you’ve used are really cool, especially the water drops. Remember to write where you found the images on the internet when you use them for maximum points next week.
I’m looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Kaylan,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
Your Water project slide show is really impactful. I like how you’ve opened with “Water!” which straight-away lets a reader know it’s important with a little bit of a panic because it is a little scary to think how clean water is so scarce for lots of people.
The images you’ve used are really cool, especially the water drops. Remember to write where you found the images on the internet when you use them for maximum points next week.
I’m looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel
oh my god kaylan you are so thoughtful about your words and pronunciations
ReplyDeleteand spellings wow you are getting better and better