Hi Kaylan, It's Brooklyn and some things about your learning is that i liked how you and olive and different ideas for the writing but i think that you could add somemore learning or maths problem to add to your new game!
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Hi Kaylan,
ReplyDeleteIt's Brooklyn and some things about your learning is that i liked how you and olive and different ideas for the writing but i think that you could add somemore learning or maths problem to add to your new game!